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DawnMarie
01-21-03, 12:39 AM
I don't know what this is really about but i want to post it ..

When I was younger I would sit on my daddy's lap and watch TV with him , he was always watching war movies and stuff about history .. And all the movies I watched with him I thought they were fake because it was on TV .. I remember playing war games with my friends and my cousins .. To me it was all fun in games , entertainment. I had no clue ..

It was all real life to you ! You were actually there in the woods holding a weapon , hearing helicopters and gun shots going off around you ; Watching your friends go down one by one , not knowing if you'd be the next one to go down .You were scared , By your self behind enemy lines .. but you were still Man enough to get through it you fought your way out you made it home to me ..

You were a stranger when you come home , nobody wanted to help you or even talk to you they spit on you . You served your country well

ITS NOT COMPLETE AND ITS A ROUGH

Im writing it to my father , my be youll understand it better .. what you think ??

young_dog19
01-23-03, 04:14 PM
beautiful...sad, but true. maybe you should consider writing someday!

DawnMarie
01-23-03, 04:43 PM
Really ..


thank you :)